多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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0 ?8 _3 p& S! R, c0 Y五绝 无题 Sparse Stars
: U" @3 \' ]. J( ? c, I莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night$ m6 y) F- I8 I9 r' ?
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high
/ D( z0 ^& ^' B) \& O, Q虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
& u& m/ U! c) J" m心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright