多谢几位——
上午那一首最后一句最后一句意思虽佳,却不合格律,现改成如下:
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五绝 无题 Sparse Stars6 M- y+ a4 q' g2 y' [9 [
莫道夜星稀 In the sky of a dark night! |! y7 b4 |7 j
此星耀北极 Only the Polaris hangs up there high5 ?# Y }4 p% E5 j/ k
虽无拱月闹 No moon or other stars
+ o; W, u9 c8 E+ e心静道无迷 But my heart and the path are both bright